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Perhaps, you cannot
see this...  

Yet, there she drapes,
bound and bent back in
the arms of lustrous tethers.
Hovering in the darkened theater
flickering of fervent grace
through the lingering, suspended
wisps of a pilgrim's prayer candle,
she is hanging there.
Like a staged angel,
all string and no capability.

Oh, but can you feel that?

The sounds of passing instants
are reverberating, groaning
echoes from the way she is
swaying out there, reminiscent
of cellos and splintering boughs,
gutted hymns and cabaret.
No specter dares upon the crumbling
curtain, such fear to provoke her from
waste. This pledge has the intensity of
perpetual motion. Chimes heard
in the distant twelfth hour breed
this crime, only to start once more, timeless.

Could you cope with eternity?  

Stretching thin as if she were
time itself, the keeper reclines
in her net of binds with the
patience of compliance, bare feet
curling in the way ribbons singe.
'Round the shifting dune, afloat
and spiraling, a living pendulum
whose fingertip draws the continuous
circle to mark this rotation in blistering,
petrifying sands. She draws the map,
if only to prove how long the snake
can devour its own end.

Should anyone empathize with this?

If only to see the passage of this
wait, this lingering, she plots the pro
longing. Every revolution,
a testimony to the hope of the devotee,
or willpower itself. Yet, the diagram has
no visible end... Such provides judgment,
pitiable excuse. A murderer in that midst,
killing time, hanging instead of falling
on the stage of selfish history.
Whitened knuckles bruise
to forbid freedom from that cocoon
of silken chains, bones fuse to
maintain the self-imposed prison
in open air. She is her own keeper,
coiling in the confines of devotion,
waiting, as every transient eventually will.

Perhaps,
you cannot see this...

Time is thought at its
most destructive, decaying the
infinite to trickling sands in the
hourglass. Superimposed on
every possibility, we have distinguished
our own slavery and prophecy...
Thus, you will see this.
As two hands on the clock tower,
we will always catch up to one another.
When the keeper's circle passes you,
light the prayer candle, pilgrim,
and witness what shade is cast.
©2006-2009 ~adiime
:iconadiime:

Author's Comments

"i give it all to you
reaching as i fall
i know it's already over, now."
Red
Already Over,

This piece... needs your patience. I would appreciate feedback on this- I see more than I can find words for.

I finished this one while watching a meteor shower. Stunning.

Here's a thought... I saw a massive pendulum in a museum when I was a child- it will never stop moving, ever. When writing this, I thought back to it... and I wonder...

So, every action has an equal and opposing reaction. But how do pendulums fit into that equation? They don't react, they continue, circling endlessly. Seamless.

Maybe, reactions aren't reactions at all. Maybe what we percieve to be reactions are in fact necessary continuations of the original action. I tip a domino... the action isn't complete until the entire length of them has fallen. The perfect circle defies reaction, as does the pendulum which draws it, spurred perpetually by gravitational pull and the very heartbeat of this planet. I...can't...explain. ugh! I need to find a physicist, now

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:iconhiddenmeme:
Love it. I don't think I can say anything negative about it. Not first through anyway. It captured me. Thanks for the great read!

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I am a hero to someone...
But who will save me...?
Trapped inside my shell...
My one desire... to be free...
:iconadiime:
thank you for taking the time to enjoy it.

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"We don't cover our eyes to see better.
We shut them to keep our truth from being seen."

Panos
:iconcut-devil4:
haha.. I told him to look at it!! :yum:

But I wasn't up for commenting then... bad mood...

ahh.. the imagery in this is captivating!! awesome freaking read!!

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~someone once told me that life was a rollercoaster.
~ someone else told me that it doesn't slow down until you reach the end, a rollercoaster that is.
~I want to know what happens when the rollercoaster is going so fast that you can't feel anything any
:iconprosepetals:
I had to read this...a few times...I have no critique to offer. :) The imagery is exquisite.

I felt myself drifting disembodied somehow...

--
"...I can be cruel, but let me be gentle with you..."

~~Be careful...it's dumb out there.
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:iconamyleerose:
I'll need to read this again in a better state of mind.. But this made a lasting impact on me.. My entire mood changed.


"Maybe what we percieve to be reactions are in fact necessary continuations of the original action. I tip a domino... the action isn't complete until the entire length of them has fallen."

I remember going through exactly this thought. I must think/remember to say more
:iconhiddenmeme:
I've re-read the piece... It's more stunning than I remember. And your comment on it really makes me think. It's a beautiful work. I really can't express my thoughts on it.

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I am a hero to someone...
But who will save me...?
Trapped inside my shell...
My one desire... to be free...

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